The title is weird XP. So I am gonna put the summary thing in the author note thing because it doesn't fit here. [Dedicated to Sean. I wonder where you are, buddy!]
Four reasons why eight teen year old Venus Fasdery's life is ruined:
1.) Her best friend, Kim Jeders is pregnant. Venus' boyfriend, Brent Kesh, is the father of the child.
2.) Venus' dad lost his job and she is being forced to live with her twenty eight year old aunt. Who is blind and missing a leg for God knows what reason.
3.) She just got fired from her job at GameStop. She has no money.
4.) A mysterious homeless teenager who has a shopping cart filled with soup cans is stalking her.
When will Venus' life finally get better?
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I cant wait for more chapters! You have me intrigued with the premise of this story...and yes there are grammatical errors, but those can be fixed later!! Write on!
A lot of problems for Venus. You open the door to many mysteries and problems to get over. I look forward to see where you are taking this story. A very strong beginning.
Coyote
Sounds interesting. I'd read it :D
As for it being your first book, kudos for trying! And don't automatically say that it's bad; you don't know until you try!
Oh my, when will Venus's life get better? I want to know. Such a interesting portrayal. And I so cannot wait to find out. Very nice. Hope to see it when you post. :)
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So, as you see my name is Naomi Rose. Other people may know me as Naomi the lost the ninja. Or just as plain old Naomi XP.
I am fifteen years young (bahaha).
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