Smile

Smile

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  When you see me,
  walking alone,
  I will smile.

  I will smile
  and wave and
  say I am alright.

  Then when you
  are out of my
  sight,
  I will run
  and cry. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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Naomi Roseღ
This is bad.

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I understand how you feel too...because I want to do that every day...I just try not to...because I don't want a repeat of what happened....anyways...good write. I can relate and I like it....

Posted 13 Years Ago


i understand how you feel .....

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is not bad. You summed it up fairly well. We as women are forced to put on a show and tell everyone that everything is alright when it truly isn't. I've learned that if you have nobody to run too and you keep it all in you will implode. Everyone needs an outlet and let your poetry be yours.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw! I'm so sorry that you feel like this girl! It's a sad poem, with a beautiful flow and word.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 6, 2011
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Tags: Short, poetry, fake happiness

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