Life Is Better When You're A Kid

 Life was so much

 easier, when boys

 had cooties.

  Life was more safer,

  when the worst

  crime you could

  commit was stealing

  someone's crayons.

  Life would be better

  for you when

  you wouldn't have to

  worry about money,

  or popularity, or

  clothes.

  Life was better

  when I was

  a little girl. 

Author's Note

This is bad. I just made it up off of the top of my head :P

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

So true.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Truth! I love this poem. You captured a pure energy here.
I loved it. It is a refreshing outlook on life.

[Cody McGeary]

I agree with Susy that the concept and ideas were great but if the wording was worked out a little more it would have made it better. But still very nice. Keep it up.

[raindroplove]

umm just to say ............my life as a kid ws not as great as my life now......so.....good wright though

[Suzy Q]

So true :D
Could be better worded though, but the point got across.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are very true. When life change to competition. All fun goes away. Would be nice if school taught life and knowledge in a relax situation. Where people could do what they desire. Paint, sing and dance should be part of education. Life and education should be fun. Even for old men like me. I like this poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I really like it, you have made a great point :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good poem. It wasn't bad. I think you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

[A.E. Surdam]

I like it. Great job. And it's true, life is better when you're a kid. :)

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Not bad my friend and the best poems come from the "top of our head" life is always better when we are innocent for they have not yet been exposed to second thoughts