I don't wanna be alone.

I don't wanna be alone.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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I sound like a f*****g stalker XPP

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  I can't stand to
  sleep alone
  in the night,

  I need someone,
  I need you beside me.

  I can't stand to walk
  through the hallways of
  hell without you
  on my mind. 

  I can't lose you,
  because then I will
  be alone. 

  I don't want to,
  I don't need to
  be alone. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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A strong poem with great desire for love. Love allow us to dream and know peace. I believe need to go slow and easy. Enjoy every precious moment of love. You don't want to waste emotion. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol, your headline, "I sound like a stalker." Don't we all have our moment of that, when liking someone? It's okay.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I know how that feels, when you can't be alone and you need someone's company. But the last line is true. "I don't need to be alone". You never have to be alone. There's always someone.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I don't need to be alone.

In the dark alleyways of love, want and need are often the same thing, or very close nevertheless.
The pain of keeping him close often overrides the pain of not having him by your side.
A wonderful piece. Though I'm not sure that I interpreted the right way...but still...wonderful! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's very concise and you had to elaborate but no problem. It's nice poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


simple and strong in brevity, the direct to point aspect is solid and effective.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes you need that alone period, before you find someone great, so you can find yourself and grow into the individual you are meant to be. Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes beig alone isn't a bad thing but being alone for a long time isn't sometimes qwe need "space" and sometimes we need touch Touch is good for the soul and the heart and the blood pressure But sometimes we need to be alone. Good poem though a bit on the negitive side.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Being alone is hell its self but being in hell and alone is worse! i like your poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I wouldn't want to be alone either. I mean especially when if I was depressed. I would need someone to be with me too. I know how you feel. Good poem. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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