I'm Naomi

A poem about myself :P

  I am loud,

  but at the same

  time I am completely silent.

  I am crazy,

  but at the same

  time I am normal.

  I dance by myself.

  I cry with my friends.

  I die with my fake

  family.

  I'm Naomi.

  I'm just a girl. 

Author's Note

This poem is kind of spazzy.

Reviews

[knowman]

I'm a rhymer and meter man, but did like this poem more than most other poems that don't rhyme, I don't understand how the rating goes but I guess I'll learn.

[Sujash I. Purna]

You're young so you're thinking that way. You have a potential to write something great. It's just the beginning. Good work here!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this poem was good. You can at least explain yourself in very few lines. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Joiedevivre]

Nice poem; it made me think that we are all the same no matter what our behaviour and also that within every characterisation lies the justice of the opposite.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is good to meet you. Being young and filled with a lot of energy. Life should be like you stated above in your poem. Have fun and be safe. A very good poem.
Coyote