I am an egg.
A Poem by
Naomi Roseღ
It's kind of depressing and kind of weird and kind of funny and it's just fucked up XP
I am plain and boring
on the outside, but on
the inside I am
bright and happy.
I am broken,
and scared of
being broken again.
I am no one.
I am just a stupid egg.
© 2011 Naomi Roseღ
Author's Note
This is kind of bad.
Reviews
This is very good. I like it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
no! this is very nice. Indeed! Actually I was reminded of The Beatles' "I Am The Walrus"! It's a promising piece of poetry :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
no! this is very nice. Indeed! Actually I was reminded of The Beatles' "I Am The Walrus"! It's a promising piece of poetry :)
Wow thats Interesting! i like this a lot it work nice.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow thats Interesting! i like this a lot it work nice.
Nice metaphor!
This poem seems simple enough, but gives one a lot to think about as they look beneath the surface.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice metaphor!
This poem seems simple enough, but gives one a lot to think about as they look beneath the surface.
It's not bad at all. I like the imagery. I can imagine being an egg and being afraid to break. Thanks for sharing. :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's not bad at all. I like the imagery. I can imagine being an egg and being afraid to break. Thanks for sharing. :D
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So, as you see my name is Naomi Rose. Other people may know me as Naomi the lost the ninja. Or just as plain old Naomi XP.
I am fifteen years young (bahaha).
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