breaking innocence

I'm not the same girl that i was before,

i watch these soiled white walls that surround me,

fall to the floor,

letting my spirit scream,

and run free,

as the walls enclose,

on who i used to be,

i open my eyes,

i can no longer clearly see,

it make my eyes sore,

to look at who i was before,

the peices fall,

like rain from the sky,

look at me,

and dry your eyes,

as darkness takes over,

i can not escape,

breaking innocence,

is my cruel fate.

 

Author's Note

i was bored so i wrote this hope you enjoy

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

thanks

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is beautiful and I also love this poem

[Sam Severn]

Powerful n' poetic n' emotion-packed stuff! The imagery is stark n' your voice takes us on a journey straight into your heart....Fantastic!!! ㋡

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

wow i really liked it has an emotion to it, that i cannot expain but i enjoyed it.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Wow! Really good Katie!