far away

I  try to escape,

I can not stay,

take me where i'm free to lay,

in feilds of flowers,

alone at peace,

free to dream,

so I close my eyes,

and in this dream I pray,

will take me somewhere,

far away.

Author's Note

i got really board and decided to write this i know its not perfect so just tell me what to fix and i will correct it. i realize it is very short but i really couldn't think of anything else. this is also inspiration for my group. hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[♥(heatherawesome..]

This is really beautiful. I love it. Keep up the awesomely beautiful work. U deserve it.

[Ashley.M.E]

This is a really good poem. Well done.

[sarcastic]

short but i liked it. you know i don't like to read stuffs haha ily.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

short but um well not did not grab my attention much, but it was there to the point.