death to the outsiders

death to the outsiders

A Poem by chaotic katie

death of the outsiders,

has finally rang,

that gloomy  afternoon the dark bird sang,

oh how the sound echoed through the halls,

as the ones standing by watched as tears fall,

the death of the outsiders,

where they relly that far gone?
their fears not hidden,

their hands not held,

and we can only look at the foolish murder we have caused,

all the lives that have been lost,

and they pay the cost,

the death of the outsiders,

brought nothing but gloom and doom.

© 2010 chaotic katie


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Totally love this, awesomekatie! Has a movie-like feel n' a dark secret story that makes me want to know more. Your use of language is outstanding. Way COOL!! ㋡

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice. Needs some editing but very interesting piece. I applaude you! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Chilling. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


for the fobidden unwanted love group

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 18, 2010
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chaotic katie
chaotic katie

Canton, OH



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Greetings darling writers, allow me to explain a bit about myself. I started writing when I was 13 and fell in love with it. Over the years I have won 2 awards for it. I keep most of my old works pos.. more..

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