set me free

i was trapped,

alone in the dark,

i couldn't find my heart,

but you kept searching and found the key,

and now my heart is free. 

Author's Note

hope you enjoy :)

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

Beautiful !!!

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

“Found”

other than that i loved it, it gave an image of a boy searching in tall grass and a little girl crying. Great piece.

[Mickey]

very short, but still liked it.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

extremely short I think if it were longer it would be better because you dont really have enough room to describe everything better an more fluidly but I really liked it its a nice outline good job!

[Matthew J. Price]

very short but within thos few words it rhymed and has a deep meaning especially to me

[BELLA]

loved it