imaginary lines

trapped,

imprisioned,

behind these imaginary lines,

the lines that i have always stood behind,

the lines that i have walked upon,

 like a rope that i feared was weaeing too thin,

i was afraid to step over them,

at the risk of being swallowed by my fears and pain,

and the darkness that would follow,

but now,

i don't care,

i'm ready to be free,

so i leap and touch the sky,

forever free of the imaginary lines

Author's Note

this poem is about taking risks hope u like it

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

Jump so that we may touch the sky !!

[chaotic katie]

:)

[♥(heatherawesome..]

wow thats awesome

[sarcastic]

u walk the white lines

[Matthew J. Price]

the whole concept is a great idea for a poem.:) keep writing(:

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Beautiful job. It had wonderful imagery. I liked it very much. Needs editing but otherwise its really good.

[BELLA]

i loved it ,u allways knw what i'm thinking. grate job

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This is simply beautiful and motivating. great write..I do like it very much awesomekatie. No wonder you are awesome lol?

[Luna Northstar]

I love this, its beautifully done, great job.