escape

When i'm trapped in a state of mind and i cant't find the key,

i find the place where i can be free,

i create a world where i can fly and let my spirit touch the sky.

I have escaped and found the key and will no longer be held down,

i have found my wings to fly and now i'm free.

Author's Note

this poem is about escaping the state of mind where you feel trapped inside your own head and breaking free to find a place you enjoy and can call your own.

Reviews

[E. R. Rawding]

There's not much more i can say lol, taratara covered all of it.

You have the right idea and you are fairly good at writing, just work on the grammar now :)

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

good job. reaalyy truthful and inciteful. I think you could use a little editing (capitalization) but otherwise great job!