escape

When i'm trapped in a state of mind and i cant't find the key,

i find the place where i can be free,

i create a world where i can fly and let my spirit touch the sky.

I have escaped and found the key and will no longer be held down,

i have found my wings to fly and now i'm free.

Author's Note

this poem is about escaping the state of mind where you feel trapped inside your own head and breaking free to find a place you enjoy and can call your own.

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

An uplifting poem for sure !!!
Ahh to be free and to fly from one edge to another in the sky =D

[Wórdsmíth]

& i think i called this my own, yeah..it's an another good write pretty one. liked this one again, you said well here about "escape", everyone' wanna escape and wanna fly but then what a thing is that stoop's us catch us to take a long fly...i liked this one much than before one's because, i really like such kinda pieces to read where i can find reality and here in your writin' i founded much reality, even it's a live poem..lol
well, i read it in evenin' time first and i think i'm gonna take a fly over the sky, but...omg, i got no wings...not prob, i can fly with the help of glider's wings....lol
that's a good one write pretty, nice work again, i really liked your work, now i'm confused should i continue to write my own' or just sit here and read only yours...lol

[chaotic katie]

thanks glad you liked it

[Wórdsmíth]

well, how can't i glad in your writin'..lol, it's so powerful and does always work as a "TNT"..LOL

[Death Girl]

love it

[♥(heatherawesome..]

awesome

[sarcastic]

u likey rymes?

[BELLA]

kate i loved it

[chayla]

That was relly beautiful kk....i relly like it tht definetly desurves a 100% good job!!!!!

[MusicJunkie66]

I can totally relate to that. Beautiful job!!

[Subjective Sanity]

I got that even before I read your note. This poem is TERRIFIC! I loved it!!!!

[maryjaneuy]

nice job! short but meaningful.
keep it up. :D