This Monster i call me

I hate myself,

The words I say,

Just pushes everyone away,

I look in the mirror,

And keep on pouring tears,

And with stinging eyes I see,

This monster I call me.

Author's Note

I feel like I just lost everything

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

In my day, this is what we would call 'grabbing the horns and bring the steer to tears'. The fact there is a personal spin makes it more and more interesting on the psychological level, keep up the work.

[Anubis]

I love this! So short but really effective, great work!

[chaotic katie]

thank you so much for the feedback

[Antoñyo]

Write to vent...always release back it into the wild, where it comes from...heal, move on and improve.
Words have power and I love that they heal and save.

Thanks for sharing a piece of your world.

[Death Girl]

You are not a monster. I LOVE you sis you know I always say sometimes but I ways LOVE yous

[Luke Rawlings]

Quite a philosophical piece and a strong one. Well done :)

[chaotic katie]

thanks for the feedback!

[Kent Clark]

You haven't lost everything. I'll be here to help you get it all back. The poem was great. I love the use of words and the way it all expresses what you feel (though I probably had something to do with that, which I'm sorry for). Great poem, baby.

[chaotic katie]

Its not exactly you...

[Guilt]

Y'know, I sometimes wonder what I would do if a monster was all that I was. And I decided that if I was a complete monster, I might as well be the best monster I could be. And that thought is just one that helps me realise that I'm not yet a complete monster, because when I think of flowing with it, I see I have so much to lose.
Monstrous moments will always be there, loyally thrashing you, but extremes are good reminders of what it is to be balanced.
The mirror stare-down is a very relatable image. We all belong where the wild things are ;)

- Guilt

[chaotic katie]

Thanks so much for the feedback!

[Infinity Blues]

When all is lost...Have a drink, and a little think, then go out there and gain everything all back!
Lifes a b***h, but you can handle her, even when yuo think you cant.
I very much like your words, there is a deep sadness. Chin up love, it will get better

[chaotic katie]

thank you!

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

I hope you can get it all back and I really enjoyed your poem it really shows your view on your self very nice I wouldn't call you a monster because you helped me out a lot great job and keep your head up

[chaotic katie]

awe thank you for the kind review!

[unbrakable fragile girl]

anytime:)

[Simon Welsh]

When we lose everything, we are in every position to gain everything.

[chaotic katie]

very true! thanks for the feedback elliot!