Wizard of oz alternate (Dorthy lands on Glinda)

Dorothy:  Oh Toto, what a strange dream!

Dorothy:  It’s so beautiful, but where-

Wicked witch- ehehehehehehehehe (blowing bubbles)

Dorothy:  who are you? Where am i?

Wicked witch- I am Evanora wicked witch of the east, you’re in oz my pretty and now that you have murdered Glinda, I shall rule over all ahahahahahahaha!

Dorothy: That’s horrible, and I would never murder anyone.

Wicked witch- look there my pretty, you have dropped a house on the good witch of the north.

Dorothy:  *Gasps*

Wicked witch- Now I’m off to take over oz, good luck with the munchkins they won’t be happy with you. Ehehehehehehe *she runs off*

Dorothy:  Oh Toto, this is horrible, whatever shall we do!

Munchkin-  You! You have done this! You have murdered our queen! State your name witch.

Dorothy:  But, I didn’t mean to i- wait I’m not a witch, I’m Dorothy Gale from Kansas I was swept up in a tornado and ended up here.

Munchkin-Well, if you are truly not wicked, then perhaps you can help to fix this.

Dorothy: of corse, I’ll do anything to help.

Munchkin- Did you bring your broomstick with you?

Dorothy:  I’ve already told you, I’m not a witch!

Munchkin- well, if you don’t have powers or a broomstick, you’ll need to follow the yellow brick road to oz, once you are there,  you must seek the advice of the great and powerful oz.

Dorothy: but where does the red brick road lead to?

Munchkin-  Just, follow the yellow brick road. *skips  away*

 

Author's Note

A script i wrote for my film critic prodject, i might do another idea if i think of one. Feel free to leave suggestions for me and feedback is appriciated. :)

Reviews

[Death Girl]

this was funny when we filmed it. good times good times.

[chaotic katie]

oh my gosh my grandma was hilarious

[Frankielosophy]

Very interesting... Looking forward to how it turns out.

[haymaker14]

This was much better then the original. The twist really adds an interesting touch. I would really enjoy more of this. This has a very good hooking point, it made me wan't to read more and more! Keep up the good work my friend! Make more I hope?
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX *******Haymaker14*******

[chaotic katie]

ok i'll be sure to work on it!

[haymaker14]

Yea!!!!!! Can't Wait

[chaotic katie]

:3

[haymaker14]

:)

[Chloe]

This would have been a much better plot for the story. It's much more interesting than the original one, with somewhat of a dark twist of an innocent girl killing a good witch without knowing it, then being forced to rescue some little munchkins and kill yet another person to save them. Great job on this! Screenplays are hard.

[Alexander Rodgers]

Oooo I like it. Well written screenplay! I wouldn't want to be caught dead down the red brick road lol

[chaotic katie]

glad you like it :)