Frog

Long hair, long nose, a jitter-eye'd

red-lipped dragonfly sits still on the pond,

as I hop free of my lily.  As is rarely

the case, she's an easy catch and tasty,

thin and crispy, worthwhile and risk-free,

because I breathe deep and swim well.

My tongue, long-stretched, makes a

quiet catch, and she is mine.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Not bad for a kids story.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lol~ thought it was a children's rhyme until the last suggestive line~

[Larry Dyson]

maybe...tryed studying some types of poetry?