Thou Art

the fresh tomato of

a dry quiche

the warm rain

from summer's only cloud

the lipstick stain

on my favorite shirt

that made that shirt

my favorite

the peach that

put georgia out of business

Reviews

[aweavers]

I'm surprised to find such competent review on a general poetry site, thanks for the thoughts guys :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I find this quite interesting as a Georgia Peach who just wrote a poem last night about lipstick on a poet's collar...........coincidence perhaps?

[Larry Dyson]

zapppsplatttt!......My frog eats your butterfly..poetry is a complete thought or at least a suggested one...need some help or guidance? I'm game..

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

This had the feel of a meandering thought which passes through someone's mind during a moment of boredom. It didn't feel finished or complete. There were no deeper layers, or any effort put into constructing a fully fledged poem. It had the feel of something rushed, simple, and almost jarring.