7 of spades

7 of spades

A Poem by 7ofspades

I awaken
not in a cold sweat
but drawing out each breath in front of me
slowly
as i lie supine on my bed 

we were seated on white stone benches
spectators in an artificial park with no one there
she was sitting to my right and you were to her right
she being the barrier that separated you and I

I saw you draw a plastic playing card out from your pocket
was it the 7 of diamonds? or 9 of spades? I couldn't tell. 
but I was sure it was a playing card
innocent and bare

and as you turned the playing card over
a flicker of sunlight caught it at just the right angle
for precisely half a second
for me to see the blade embedded in the plastic

she however, was naive to any imminent threat
for we were all just strangers on a park bench 
waiting for nothing 
it was quiet and blank, an artificial park with no trees

and in a moment it happened so quickly
the slash of plastic against her arm
the vibrant color staining the white stone bench
and i instinctively reached out to help her, to hold pressure against the wound

and then i looked in disbelief to you
only i couldn't locate your eyes to see you
all i could see was the playing card 
still clean 
fully plastic 

as you leaned toward my wrist with it in your palm 
I tried to step backwards, all the while trying to find the darks of your eyes
but it was too late and I was running,
shaking myself awake to avoid her same fate

it is still dark outside 
and like a cat I lightly pounce on all fours to
lean over to my bedside table 
feel for for the single card that rests upon it

it is still dark outside
a car's head beams swing fluidly across my window
enough for me to see 
it's the 7 of spades

© 2015 7ofspades


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Full of vivid imagery, I love it. Good to see some more writing! It's always a pleasure to read, though it is woeful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A compelling dream sequence. Thank you, dear poet, for sharing it with us.
Might there be a follow up dream involving the 9-of-Diamonds?

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7ofspades

9 Years Ago

clever:) thanks for the review!
Misery

9 Years Ago

Always welcome.

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