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just some thoughts i woke up to one day..but something that i wake up to most days

That feeling before you awaken 

When you neither know that your left is your left and your right is your right...

but instead you are suspended in an unknowing-ness.

In a few brief moments you will have assembled the bits and pieces of your reality,

And you will begin to comprehend what day it is, your agenda for the day, 

And most importantly, you will know who you are

and where you stand in your world

And you will go quite immediately from this complacent place 

to one of infinite choices

But for now you are drifting---

free not only from the responsibility of knowing anything

but from the responsibility of even existing

This is the purest feeling I know

Author's Note

comments welcome :) thanks!

Reviews

[Daniel Dunlap]

This made me wish I could sleep in more often! There was a repetition of "from" in the second line of the second stanza that I don't believe was intentional. Other than that, it was a great piece! You seem to have a good sense of place and time. I'm looking forward to more from you.

[7ofspades]

good catch ;) thanks daniel!

[Captain Rilen]

Perfectly captured those feelings. Loved it! Looking forward to reading more.

[7ofspades]

thanks kirk:)!