I Quit !

I Quit !

A Poem by Avis

I cannot do this anymore, I haven't the strength to fight

I cannot live on promises of possibly, maybe, or might

I'm raising my hands, throwing in the towel, stepping away from this mess

How stupid was I, letting myself be sucked in, to all this frustration, hatred, and stress

I am giving up, stepping aside, I cannot handle when push comes to shove

I am tired and weary, and must save the strength to salvage my life and my love

I am deeply saddened, embarrassed as well, by which has led me to this place

I'll hide it within me, masking the pain, NO success....it shows in my face

I'll surrender my search for true love, for "the one", for I can't handle this bullshit, I'M SO F*****G DONE!!!

 

© 2009 Avis


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Outrage frustration and relinquished feelings
all rolled up into one is what I get from this.
Great description....

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is really good I can feel the anger with in it
if it is based on a true event of your own life , at least you got a awesome poem out of it

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Avis
Avis

Comox Valley, Canada



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