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Compartment 114
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Out of my Mind

Out of my Mind

A Poem by Dave

Some say there's no such thing

As love at first sight

To those I say

My heart is in a fight

 

No matter what I do

I can't get you off my mind

These days go by

And your love I can't find

 

I can't imagine

My life without you

True love or not

A life that can't start off new

 

As the tears keep flowing

Your love of a different kind

But a love where I can't

Get you out of my mind

© 2008 Dave


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Nicely done!! You summed up the feelings about love that a lot of people feel

Posted 16 Years Ago


Don't you just love that loved up feeling. Can't get them out of your head, find yourself doodling their name, sigh... love's grand. Lovely poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great work again. I put this one in my library.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

again, such a great piece. kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dave
Dave

Somewhere in, MA



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hello y'all. my name is dave. i've been writing for about a year and a half. i've never wanted my poems posted online because i never knew what others would think of them. I'm here to change that toda.. more..

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