The Other Breed
A Book by Emma Olsen
Carmen travels through a portal to another world and finds herself trying to reunite a number of artifacts left by Vehnia, who created many worlds based off of her psychological make-up.
© 2014 Emma Olsen
Author's Note
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Just anything is really helpful. I've done a number of edits by now but I would always like more feedback. Thank you so much! =)
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Awesome writing keep the good writing, I really got into it and couldn't take my eyes off the screen:) well dine, keep it up. Oh and I hope when you get the chance and time, you check out my story and give your rate and comment on it. Keep the awesome writing please let me know when you write new stuff. Cause I would love to check them out:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I'm glad. =) I'll let you know if I put up more chapters and I'll try to get to check out your writi.. read moreI'm glad. =) I'll let you know if I put up more chapters and I'll try to get to check out your writing soon, though I'm pretty busy right now so I can't promise right away.
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10 Years Ago
Oh crap. I totally forgot I had this comment on here. I didn't look at your stuff, did I? Could you .. read moreOh crap. I totally forgot I had this comment on here. I didn't look at your stuff, did I? Could you send me an email and I'll get to it next weekend? I don't have time to review the whole thing because I've got a bunch of requests sitting in my inbox but I owe you a look. I apologize! I'm used to going by my inbox.
By the way, I have been revising and adding some new material to this if you're interested, but I've been mostly doing chapter splitting.
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Emma OlsenPittsburgh, PA
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PLEASE don't waste my time if you're going to get defensive. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I am begging you. I promise you that I will say things that will help you (I mean, most of my reviews are around 25-30.. more..
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