Two lines only

written for the contest "Two lines only"

With but only two lines to finish this masterpiece, I pause.....a heartbeat.....

Then, I know how to finish this work of art, so I pick up my pen one last time.

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

I love your simplicity! Its beautiful and poignant.

[AK]

Nuff said! Well done.

[Charles D. Moorer]

You have done it again! I get this image of a writer hunched over a desk with pen in hand about to touch the page of a manuscript, face contorted by concentration, about to go in for the long haul and finish the work at hand. Very nicely done.

[just is]

This is wonderful, very well put together, so much meaning in such a few words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a great reminder that art doesn't finish itself, we must use our imaginations and creativity.

Great how you can say so much in so few words, excellent.

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Sorprendentemente bello. [Amazingly beautiful.]

For two lines, it's very good. :]

I enjoyed reading very much.

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I love this because it is a reminder to me that in the dryest of seasons, the most intimidating writer's blocks, I need only remember God's gift of breath and life are still mine to savor. The heartbeat is a tap on my shoulder that says, "You're alive. Bring some joy into this world I made."

Sal

[Angel Baby]

Beautiful two lines, thanks for joining the contest. P.W.