Caelyn's Song

my nine year old made this up

Let's glide across the meadow

In our dreams

I need someone to play with

Let's play 'til morning sun

In our dreams

Let the sunshine wake us up in the morning

 

Author's Note

She isn't finished yet.......

Reviews

[just is]

This is wonderful and so beautiful, enjoyed your write.

[alyssa]

omg!!! THAT IS SOOO GOOD!! I DONT THINK I WRITE THAT WELL SOME TIMES.... TELL CAELYN THAT SHE HAS A TALENT AND NEVER LET IT GO!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is so sweet, like the talent runs in the family.

[PianoandPage]

that's the best way to wake up .... the sun gradually shaking your eyelids from dreams where meadows and mothers... aww damn. now i have to write a poem.

very cute!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Light and cheerful, it should be a lovely poem when you finish.