Leaf Pile

Leaf Pile

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
"

Be careful where you jump

"

Leaves piled high, ready

 

Jump!     Pile had a hidden stick!

 

Leaves scattered again

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


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oh yeah, this i know, good time flows.

Posted 16 Years Ago
Well done

Posted 16 Years Ago
Scary but rather hilarious thought there. Might just get a 'bonk!' in the head or a 'crack!' in the skull. Loved it. Enjoyed it! And best wishes for the contest!

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on October 2, 2008
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Laura E. Aranda
Laura E. Aranda

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Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing there is a field. I'll meet you there. Rumi You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. ~Navajo Proverb One of my favorite po.. more..

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