Cupcake Paradise

Written for the 'Snack' Contest .....enjoy this yummy piece. ;0)

Please don't look at me that way

You wink through your see through clothing

that you call 'packaging'

If I eat one more, just one more

I won't be able to go out and play

Yet, already I can taste the

delicious

sweetness

the heated bread

with butter on top all of all that

sugary fake sweetness

I don't discriminate either!

Oh no!

Blue Bunny

Parade

Little Debbie

Oh yes,

And 
sexy little

Mr. Famous Amos

It sure don't matter to

I just gotta taste you one more time

Author's Note

A little different but try to understand.........haha

Reviews

[Juan]

I understand that I now have to run out to the store with this story in my head like a grocery list..LMAO..it was very cute.

[Tenten]

i like the step and flow, its transcends to so much with the style you placed into your words. but still a very good piece, i'm gonna eat a muffin now. good piece.

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

That was cute! I thought it was funny little poem type thing. It was different, but different is sometimes a good thing.
-Twilight

[Lee E. Powell]

This cool and fun

[☮]

Lol this reminds me of those shows that deal with food addictions and diets! I liked this. It's cute. Very creative.

[~amanda~]

i actually really love this one! it perfectly describes my love affair with food! lol... and you are obviously a talented writer... great piece!