Vain Dabbles

Odd pieces of thoughts captured into a 'poem'?

If pennies only take you inches

 

Families are made of glass

 

Wishes tossed in pockets

 

Neglected like plants smothering in forest

 

 

Life in America, so uncertain now

 

Raising children to be the next generation

 

Eyes half closed in the darkness

 

Truth is whose interpetation

Author's Note

This is far from complete....it might not even work....I just wanted to put it on here for now....

Reviews

[Tammy]

A ponderable for sure. I see potential. Keep at it, you could come up with a great poem.