You're The One

You're The One

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
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Written 8/21/08 on one of my Bono Days! haha

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You started

Out so right, oh so right

Ultimately winning my heart, mind and breathless nights

Right was, of course, your last name

Extreme distractions caused me to fail at seeing you, really seeing you

 

Talk is cheap, someone claimed

Hollowed out excuses

Echo, Echo

 

Only now I am

Noticing all the minute

External, Internal flaws

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


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Nice. Forgiveness comes from action, huh

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