Hues of Gloom

Hues of Gloom

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
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Pooh's rain cloud colors me sad

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Sea Foam, Charcoal Mist

Smoky Haze, Dove Gray

London’s misty mocha fog

Ethereal frothy tinged shades

Monochromatic weathered slate

Shades of stormy skies

Neutrally blinded boardwalks

 

 rainclouds

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


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Uh...been raining here for two days. I know how you feel. It was short but concise and nicely done!
Mark

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have painted a minimalist masterpiece, each word drivng home the poem, in the rain even. lol terrific work, just brilliant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is fantastic!!!!! I just love it! Into the favs.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like a good day to me, but i love weather like that. fall and winter, you have great visual in this piece. beautifuly done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Laura E. Aranda

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