Hues of Gloom

Pooh's rain cloud colors me sad

 

Sea Foam, Charcoal Mist

Smoky Haze, Dove Gray

London’s misty mocha fog

Ethereal frothy tinged shades

Monochromatic weathered slate

Shades of stormy skies

Neutrally blinded boardwalks

 

 

Reviews

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Beautiful!!!
This is amazing...
Vivid and lovely imagery with flow like windswept caress.
I love this...

Lynda

[Salvatore Buttaci]

A dynamite poem short on length but long on imagery and talent!

Sal

[The Mad Prophet]

I love this, its like making a coffee, and walking down the street at the same time. Very well done. Nicely written. The words are awesome, not much to say, they work well together.

[BrightEyes]

I love the poem though I will admit I wasn't sure that I liked the underlining of each line; but that is formatting and not writing, so.....not reviewing that lol. you've conjured up a gray and misty london day for me here; even though I've never been there - great imagery and thanks for the trip :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow fantastic and creative... plus it just rolls off the tongue.

[angelinmypocket]

What a dark gloomy place to be lost and lonely in. Positivly scarey.
But every dark cloud has a silver lining because the sun is always shining somewhere.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[R J Askew]

Like this a lot. Although it calls up images, It is also very sensuous on the ears. I find the the combinations of S and A sounds especially pleasing.

[Don Coorough]

You write beautifully and evoke commanding images! - EllisD

[Charles D. Moorer]

Well done, as usual.

[Helena]

Another beautiful write for the "Dream" contest from your talented pen Laura.
This did conjure up "loneliness" so well and certainly "fogs" always seem such very lonely places to
be in!

~ Helena ~