Moon's Advantage

Who, What, when, where, Why

The moon's romantic glow

Illuminates the lake's ripples ceaselessly ebbing

at the hour of no sin

in the meadow of our imagination

though no one is there

Author's Note

Constructive Cristicism Please

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

i love the power of the moon, i say leave it the way it is... it captures just how mysterious the moon is and how it can bring out your imagination.

[universalove]

i loved it . like the flowers in spring. so sweet. i smile at your poem with joy. really good

[The Spaniard]

I love that it is short, it works perfectly at getting at the point. Gives me much to think about and I always love that. Well done.

[Jenny Davis]

I really like this! So much to ponder in so few lines...Further, the imagery is amazing...I wouldn't change anything on this at all...and yes the second line makes lots of sense, I think it's the meat of the poem ;)

[R J Askew]

Can't think of anything to criticise...I enjoyed the piece which evokes a delightful setting. The last line seems to be all...you find youself if a wonderful moment of freedom, alone.

[Laura E. Aranda]

IS the second line making sense?