Moon's Advantage

Who, What, when, where, Why

The moon's romantic glow

Illuminates the lake's ripples ceaselessly ebbing

at the hour of no sin

in the meadow of our imagination

though no one is there

Author's Note

Constructive Cristicism Please

Reviews

[James K. Blaylock]

I truly love reading about the moon, great job!

jkb

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Great poem! I can see why the magazine wants to publish it! Good going. Keep up the good work. Keep sending poems out there so your poetry can be shared with others who just might need them.

Sal

[Marina]

Lovely poem.
The image that it put in my head was aaaaamazing.

This was an amazing poem, Laura.
I absolutely adore it.

SweetWrite,
Rina

[Emily B]

oh the ebb of it . . .

[kimberly]

beautiful!

[BrightEyes]

I wouldnt' change a thing - I loved the imagery here - there is nothing like moonlight on water and you capture it's essence here. great job.

[Charles D. Moorer]

How does one criticize perfection? As usual, you have have trumped yourself. Nicely written!

[An owl on the moon]

Such a captivating image, one that took me away for a moment from the hot, dry world I am living in right now... So well done!

Craig

[Wildfleour]

I'm not sure what type of critique you are looking for.

I found this to be a lovely little poem.

[S.J.Floreen]

I think the second like makes sense. It's probably my favorite line in the whole thing, as a matter of fact, so please don't change it if that is what you are thinking about. I like the entire poem. Short and yet convaying a great deal. Well done.