The Battle of two seasons

I know the title sounds so much better than the poem but i am a sucker for catchy titles...haha

 

Winter struggles to

Interrupt the autumn reign

Noonday sunlight’s burning glow weakens

To winter’s cold breezes

Eventually winter

Rudely wins the battle

Author's Note

I wrote this in light of a call-out for AllYou Magazine. Hopefully it will get published there as well

Reviews

[Pakino]

So far good. If you develop the poem it can be better.

[Jason Henry]

i wish it didnt end so abruptly! but the title IS really interesting, and the personification was great.

[Mysty Rayn]

This one is special. I like the descriptions you used. Great work.

[Laura E. Aranda]

do u notice
the lines
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[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very lovely poem. The title suits it fine. Thank you for sharing. Debileah