The Inn of Bate's on Eight

This is my first limerick, does it remind you a little of a black and white horror film?

Please avert your gaze before it is too late

We really shouldn't believe this is exit eight

Just continue to drive

I want to get out of here alive

Some sicko is trying to make us his bait

Author's Note

What fun! I like limericks. ...now, did i do it right?

Reviews

[Bonnie]

This caught my attention!

Yes, there is a scary element to it. The pacing and rhythm are good.

Well done!