Garden Party

Rejoicing in the time of the end of Hitle's reign. Written for 10/40 poetry contest. Using these words:perfume splendid presence oblivion purer glass sky serene two merciful

 Jasmines' aromatic perfume 

Through splendid gardens

Hushed conversions created  presence

Outside matters thrust into oblivion

No purer night 

Friends raised their glass toasting sky

Serene promises made that garden of lasting friendships

Two  jasmines watched

Life finally merciful to all

Author's Note

This is set in Germany during the ending reign of Hitler. A tyrant finally dissolved....

Reviews

[bailish]

Good imagery.

[Fran Marie]

A very well written 10/40 piece with great use of the words~

Nicely donE!!~Fran Marie

[Laura E. Aranda]

How many Jews didn't see the outside night air for fear of death? Being outside, partying, and living without looking over ones shoulder must have been like being a new birth. I am so happy about writing this one. I am proud of this one....

[Tovli]

reads like a sigh and a tribute. nicely done. tovli

[Orlando Murcia]

A toast to Hitlers end of Reign, and the
slaughtering of jews and mankind

Excellent job!!

Orlando M

[Mysty Rayn]

Well done. Beautiful.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautiful poem! Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Debileah