RainBabies

There they are, can you see them too?

 

 

Dances of rain cry down

 

Upon the little rain babes

 

Quickly now dash out

Author's Note

Have you ever read the book? I highly suggest it. It is a great story

Reviews

[Aria]

This is a good haiku. Sweet and loud at the same time. The only thing is that your first line is 6 syllables not 5. I'll still consider it for the contest because it is a very good piece of poetry.

[Ebs]

I have this book at home! It's in one of those old old old covers. But back to the poem. I think it's cute. especially the last line: Quickly now dash out.

ebs