Laura/Lynsey

A tale of two sisters once a heart beat apart and now .... as mothers themselves

Laura.

Dutiful Mothering

Wishing Dreaming Beholding

Mother Sister Friend Foe

Betraying Confiding Masking

Mothering Lonely

Lynsey

Author's Note

Diamante
Shape
All this is from Paul M.
Diamante is a seven line poem where the theme or topic of the poem ends opposite to the opening topic. English grammar is used and the rules are as follows;

Line 1 - Name (Noun) Theme/Object

Line 2 - Two adjectives describing the noun in line 1.

Line 3 - Three participles (-ing or -ed), relating to line 1 and 2 of the poem.

Line 4 - Four nouns (2 refering to the noun in line 1 and the other 2 refering to line 7).

Line 5 - Three participles (relating to noun in line 7)

Line 6 - Two adjectives (describing the noun in line 7)

Line 7 - Noun (names the Theme or object which is the opposite of the noun in line 1.

Reviews

[Kitty]

You wrote a beauiful poem and the flow of this diamante is great!!!!

Nicely done!!!!

Josie

[Laura E. Aranda]

I find it uncanny that the last three words
is
Mothering
Lonely
Lynsey
when sometimes that is exactly what I feel like doing! odd, that my words came out that way and i never noticed until later......hmmmmmmm