Laura's Six-Word Memoir

I wrote this for a contest on a whim but still......

 

 

Laura tried to scratch past surfaces.

Reviews

[Gandré]

I found this poetic and convincing at the same moment......to scratch on past surfaces is going back to situation which are already gone, non existing scenario of something what was unpleasant making it better or something what was lovely and got lost and getting it back. profound sentence.

[Sarajane]

oh thats great!!! it can be taken so many ways. very good for a memoir, because isent that what we all do? wish to change the past? and it could lead up really well to what your doing now to do that. simple, but i like