My Future

My Future

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
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This is about my soul mate, my husband. I wrote this a couple of years ago right after we got married

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What is your name?
I ask
You know my name
He states

Why do you love me?

I ask
Because you are the puzzle that fits my piece
He reminds
Why are you here?

I want to know

Because without you there is no new day

He repeats
Why do you hold me the way you do?
I inquire
Who else could hold you like me?

He wonders
What do you see when you look at me?
I want to know
My tomorrow and yours
He says

What is your name?
I ask

Your future
Your destiny
Your husband

Your Soul Mate
Your life
Your best friend
Your Godsend

But you know all that
He smiles

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


Author's Note

Laura E. Aranda
This deserves an, "Awwwwwwwwwwww"

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Loved this! the dialogue of L-O-V-E! How sweet it is...
Lyrical

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awwwwwwwwwwww this was great! you can really get the feeling of true love from this poem! very well written!
laceyjane

Posted 16 Years Ago


definitaly awwww! i love it
really like the way you keep the lines short, and flow back and forth between you and him. and the ending of when he tells you his "name" is just wonderful
great read

Posted 16 Years Ago



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