Emo and Goth's Tale

I wrote this 8-27-07

Here is a tale with two as a cast

An Emo and a Goth met at last

The Goth snarled, "I hate you!"

Sad little Emo moaned, "Me too!"

The Goth advanced with a knife

Poor little Emo ran for his life

Surprisingly he escaped at last

Realizing he didn't want to die quite so fast

Author's Note

ROFL
Hahaha
I love this one! It makes me smile everytime!!!!

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

There is a video on YouTube or somewhere else, where they say they have a Goth and an Emo fighting. They have the Emo kicking the butt of the Goth. I think it is staged. This better fits my idea of the G vs. E fight. It reminds me of the problems they were having (may still be having) in Mexico with the beatings of Emo kids. Then again, the Goth kids of today... compared to 10-15 years ago... who knows? This was awesome though, and I did love it - gave me a laugh I needed tonight! Thank you...

[Isolophobe]

lol aw thats good.

[Sean M. Addams]

love the humor in this piece..... flow was good and imagery was enough to get a mental picture in my head of thre poem... nice job on this.

[Pakino]

lol this is hilarious hahaha

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Goths are amusing and emos pathetic. I'm pulling for the Goth. lol Funny note: in art and architecture Gothic means "light and airy". Now there's some irony.

[Lyra H]

Ooh so awesome! It got me ROFLMAO!!!!!! ;) Good stuff!

[Marina]

HAHAHA.
OH MY GAWDD.
I absolutely LOVVVEEE this.

It makes me smile!
Hahaaa

Thanks for posting!


XxStaySweet,
Rina