For Rent

A six word story for a contest.

For Rent: Girl’s heart; needs love.

Author's Note

This is a six-word story that I wrote for a contest. I'd like to know your interpretations on this one. :)

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

expressive.. one word answer.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I love when poems are short, yet they have such meaning! That's why I love haikus. Wonderful poem!

[Archia]

Oh sweet. I love how there is still a story yet it's so short.

[Rose of Gondor]

Simple and sweet and sad at the same time. Funny how six words can bring so much emotion.

[Ice Girl]

Simple, but really great!

[A. L. Allen]

@Teralyn: Ahh, but see, that is the mystery behind this one. Why would it be for rent, instead of for sale? Maybe she's not ready to commit to any one person; or she's too afraid to. o.O (*waggles eyebrows mysteriously*)

@Jazzy: Grr, I don't know why it does that! I change one stinkin' word, and then all of my formatting goes 'poof'. :( It's fixed now, though. ;)

[Miss Evans]

Awesome!

I think that it would be better said "For Sale", a girl's heart needs permanent care, no? Whoever loves you should own your heart, in theory to romance.

[Jasmine Thousand]

I love it! It's sweet, and I like the color, the pic... but I like the font for the first version better :) To me it seems like the girl's heart was just broken...

[A. L. Allen]

Ahhh!!! Thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix that right now.

[Miss Evans]

I like this!

But it's seven words, mi amiga.