My nation,my pride

On 26th January (Republic Day of India),a dedication to my country (A Satire)

O! my nation,my pride

I salute you

I pollute you

Even when I am dried

I still dilute you

I still salute you

O! my nation, my pride

I respect you

But I expect you

To be on my side

Only then I accept you

Only then I respect you

O! my nation, my pride

I crowned you

But I bound you

To make my aspirations abide

After that I found you

After that I crowned you

O!my nation, my pride

Be my biddable bride

In my hands like a kite

And move in the direction which I decide

MY NATION,MY PRIDE!!

Author's Note

please ignore grammatical mistakes
I can't bound my words in chains of language :D

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

Your "chains of language" are exactly as they should be. Your pride in your nation springs from every line. Excellent work. There is nothing wrong with your grammar, "poetic license" allows us some leeway with grammar.

[Poetic Beauty]

This shows the great respect you have for your country and of the things you expect in return. The flow of this piece is really smooth. It expresses your thoughts clearly.