Under the shadow of mine

I promise you'll never feel insecure

Even if you commit the biggest crime

You'll be loved infinitely for sure

Without the limits of time

Your every wound would be healed and cured

Under the shadow of mine!

I promise you'll never be betrayed

Your heart will never be sore

No dirty tricks would be played

Like before

Your every tear would be stopped to pour

Under the shadow of mine!

I promise my every single poem would be dedicated to you

And each one of them would describe everything you do

Everything would be in your favor

So don't try to be clever

Please my love stay here forever

Under the shadow of mine!

Reviews

[Scissorhandds4eva<3]

no suggestions. I wish that someone would write a beautiful poem like this one about me. It's very good.

[Voice11]

I think this is a very good poem! The repeated line "under the shadow of mine" is the kicker on this one. Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope you can keep the promise of every poem for her. I like this poem. The set-up and story was very good. I like it all. A outstanding ending. Thank you.
coyote

[Jessica Mai]

I loved under the shadow of mine since it can express so many different things!! The flow was great so all the rhymes flowed together beautifully

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here.
I thought it was very touching.
Very well written and lovely flow of words.
Like the layout as well.

[harman kour]

nice write... Is it genuine or jst a play wid words??? :P haha.. jst kiddin I liked the style n Ofcourse "Under the shadow of mine" loved this phrase...!