Words

Words are the only thing which I can't stop

I DEDICATED ALL MY WORDS TO YOU

        BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER ANYWAY

        THIS IS ALSO TRUE

        THAT THEY ARE LEFT WITH NO MORE WORTH TODAY

YOUR SMILE,YOUR CRY AND YOUR EVERY MOVE

MADE AN EXCELLENT CAUSE

FOR MY WORDS TO PROVE

MY LOVE TOWARDS YOU AS HARD AS I COULD

BUT NOW THERE'S NO WORTH OF WRITING THEM

CAUSE I CAN'T SEE YOUR RELIEVING FACE AGAIN

EVEN MY WORDS ARE FALLING DOWN LIKE RAIN

AND ARE DRENCHED IN MY PAIN

SOMETIMES WHEN I VISIT THE PLACE WHERE WE FIRST MET

TAKING YOUR REMINDING PHOTO IN MY HAND

BUT THE TEARS MAKE MY EYES WET

CAUSE THE PERSON IN THE PHOTO IS MIXED INTO THE SAND

I REALIZED THAT MY WORDS ARE NOT THAT STRONG

THAT THEY CAN STOP YOU FROM GOING AWAY

YOUR DEPARTURE PROVED MY ILLUSION WRONG

THAT I CAN STOP YOU FROM GOING BY MY LAST SONG

BUT MY WORDS ARE POURING DOWN

LIKE FROM THE WOUNDS THE BLOOD POURS

AND INSIDE MY HEART THEY ARE BRINGING A FATAL FLOOD LIKE A RIVER DOES IN ITS COURSE

CONSEQUENTLY I CAN'T STOP EVEN A SINGLE WORD EVEN WHEN I APPLY MY EXTREME FORCE 

SORRY MY LOVE I CAN'T STOP MY WORDS...........

SORRY!

Reviews

[Jessica Mai]

my personal interpretation of the structure of the stanzas are tears pouring like rain and i love it. Its different to the poems i normally see and it gives the poem a feel of being broken as if you can't be whole without this person your writing about. Great! Well done!

[r]

very well written. nicely done

[Voice11]

This seems like a very good piece to be spoken word. Great job! I can just feel the sorrow dripping from it and just trying to get it all out through your words.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem.

[Jenny Nelson]

Very nicely done. I love your last two lines. Wraps up the whole piece really well.

[Shalini Dinesh]

a very lovely and a touching poem,,, wonderful stanzas well organized... keep up the good work

[harman kour]

its a touching poem and i liked the layout... It's a heartfelt write and the agony of the heart is well portrayed! Well done... I liked it a lot! :)

[Narnie]

And the words should continue regardless. Great sentiment here... keep writing.

[deeps]

This is amazing! I love this
Wonderful flow and rhythm.
I could feel the heart ache.
Wonderfully written and well expressed.

[Prateeksha Khot]

I liked this poem. Your poems seem to indicate a broken heart . Am I correct?

I liked the fact about the poem that the flow of words or rather the flow of the poem is different from what one usually comes across in normal poems. I liked the part :

REALIZED THAT MY WORDS ARE NOT THAT STRONG
THAT THEY CAN STOP YOU FROM GOING AWAY
YOUR DEPARTURE PROVED MY ILLUSION WRONG
THAT I CAN STOP YOU FROM GOING BY MY LAST SONG

Keep up the good work.