Lullaby

Dedicated to my mom

When I was small my mother used to sing a lullaby

But I only remember the tune of that hum

Which helped me to sleep  and to stop my kiddish cry

I felt secure in the warmth of her hug

Now I am old enough but whenever I am in the darkness of agony

That hum of lullaby gives me enough strength to fight

And the warmth of her hug gives me hope to survive

Assuring me that after darkness a day will arise which would be definitely sunny

I don't remember the words of her lullaby much

But I feel I am surrounded by it and it feels as such

I am surrounded by a protective layer

Which don't allow any kind of sins to touch

My mother used to sing a lullaby to stop my cry

But now it is giving me wings to fly in the endless sky

Reviews

[Hardik Aggarwal]

all in all a nice poem dude. nice work. work on the second para it's not matching up with the poem. last two line i must say is the real essence of the poem and these adds life in it.para number one is also a gud one.please don't mind .okk.keep up you spirit...!

[Jenny Nelson]

What a wonderful tribute to your mom. Very nicely done. Love that last stanza.

[deeps]

I like this alot. I thought this was an amazing write here.
Very well written. I don't think a lullaby was even sung when I
was little i am not sure. Well written.

[Shalini Dinesh]

i don't even remember what kind of lullaby my mother sang, this poem was good and a neat write.... i have written a similar kind of poem "lullaby ( " ,) " and you can read it when time permits and give your comments...

[Abhinav]

emotional and sentimental......endearing stuff

[maryjaneuy]

this is really one of my favorite. :D
reminds me of my mom. love her. :D

[Ebb and Flow]

This is absolutely beautiful. I can feel the security in the words. It's nice how a lullaby can give you strength, hope and a sense of home. Wonderfully written.

Krys

[rockinmiley555]

i like it. it says a lot about a small memory the person had. i normally dont like poems that have long sentances but this was excellent :)