Tears from the darkness of agony

Enjoy these tears

Tears are falling from the darkness of agony but are not getting dried

As I am in an endless sorrow and vain

This is the first time when so badly i cried

But there is no one to borrow my pain

These tears are reminding me your twinkling eyes

Which I couldn't see anymore

And are not allowing me to die

As I want to be in this world no more

Also giving me a hope to survive

Even I can hardly breathe and my heart is sore

These tears are giving me so much pain

But also giving me a hope

That I'll find you at that place again

 Where you left me forever at the end of the hill slope

These tears in the darkness of agony are like a last hopeful ray

But one thing I will forever say

The only difference between you and these tears is

These tears never betray

Never ever betray!

Reviews

[deeps]

This is so wonderful, I enjoyed this write alot.
Very well written and such a wonderful flow.
Love the rhyme scheme as well.