Stephan

falling in love with some one andf they do not know it

the sun started to peak out of the corner of the sky.

My world starts to get brighter because of you.

All i see is you.

Little do you know that the little things you say light up the sky and my life,

You are my sun even thought you do not know it.

your helping along every step even if you do not know or see it.

Author's Note

sorry about type o's

Reviews

[Stephan Kim]

i liked this because my name is Stephan, and your very talented.. i just started and i dont have that many views.. must be a reason why your getting so many

[~Shadow Kissed~]

short. beautiful. and well written. good job. :)

[Sseoni]

Great poem! I really liked it! It was sweet and simple. :D

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is very simple and yet very vivid and strong in its own way.
Very beautifully done!

[joanofbooke]

love it soo much u have a great wayb with words

[DBURKE]

The idea is great! If you go back and brush up the typo's it would flow better and be easier to read.

[Angel Veselinov]

Very nice :) Loved it. Awakens good feelings :) thanks for sharing

[Prateeksha Khot]

nice writeup

[Victoria]

I liked it. Just one thing, I know it happens when you're typing fast but you put eberystep in stead of every step. Other than that, it's a very good and sentimental poem. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful and hopeful. Just separate "Every step" and the poem will be outstanding. The emotion of love and thankfulness is strong in your words.
Coyote