What to do

Person see a friend going though a hard time

I stand there watching him as he dies alittle more
The more he tells me about his problems the more that my heart brakes
I want to help he but I do not know how to and he may not let me help him
I want to cry but, I do not what him to know
It make me sad because he is sad
my heart ache for him
I feel so sad as I read how he feels
So I stand here watch and cry inside
and I wonder what show I do

Author's Note

sorry the grammar my be bad

Reviews

[joanofbooke]

you can truely feel the emotions put through in this poem is amazing

[Coyote Poetry]

A good friend is near. Sometime words are worthless. Just a human close by to talk to and hold on to can save a life or bring back hope. Poem is very good. We need people to listen and be near when we feel sad.
Coyote

[Susan14]

this is amazing and i know what you're going through, i felt the same way with my best friend, he was my boyfriend but he broke up with me for another girl, the poem itself is amazing and has much emotion in it, keep up the great work

[JustWantLove]

Compassionate and heartfelt write. Nice.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

Wow yeah only a little gramar.I can understand what you are going through I felt the same way, with my best friend and now she is my girlfriend.

[..R.I.P..]

Yeah, there's a few grammar and spelling problems that need to be fixed. I can relate, I'm like emotionally connected to my best friend and I feel the way she feels every day. It's weird, but I'm getting really used to the sudden changes in my mood.