The day I almost died

The day I almost died

A Story by Kiba Tripp

I only wish that the day of my sad never came, But when she passes I couldn’t take it. Everyone around me didn't understand what I was feeling. My father, a man that never showed emotion, turned into this walking zombie. I lost all contact with my sisters and brothers. No one would expect what would come next. Although I knew it would happen. The day it came it was so sudden that it scared me at first, but as the pain started getting numb. The light in the room seems to be getting darker as I hear a sound that is like my doorbell. I yell “THE DOOR IS OPEN!!” I hear a voice that I haven’t heard in over five years. They ask “Audrie. Hey where are you? Are you okay? Why are you being so quiet?” As I close my eyes for the final time I see my sister come through the door. She yells at the top of her lungs “AUDRIE!! WHAT THE F**K ARE YOU DOING?.....” Her voice trails off and I find myself finally without pain. I am in a place where I see everything that was in my brain. The strange thing I hear a voice saying it isn’t my time to go, but I don’t know where it is coming from. I feel a pain in my head. My eyes open and i am looking at my sister Krystal as she is sleeping on the chair next to my hospital bed. I look around and see four more chairs. My father, stepmother, sister, and my boyfriend were sitting there. Alex saw that i was awake and started to wake everyone else up. My father just looked at me. While my stepmother rubbed his back. Krystal, Bryony, and Alex rush to my sides. All I could say “why did you stop me?”

© 2015 Kiba Tripp


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Added on June 24, 2015
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Kiba Tripp
Kiba Tripp

tulare, CA



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