FINAL STRAW

FINAL STRAW

A Poem by Audrie
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a relationship with a paranoid schizophrenic

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The jitters were the final straw

The pacing was the final straw

The egotistical visions were the final straw

The cockroaches were the final straw

The garbage and s**t all over the wall was the final straw

The oatmeal all over  the kitchen floor to feed the cockroaches " final straw

The invented lazer  that was created specifically for the government

Final straw

The chewing tobacco

Final straw

The gold chains around your neck

Final straw

Arguing with a child

Final straw

Working for the CIA while shoving food into your mouth

Final straw

It’s all about you and everything that you do

Is the final straw

© 2010 Audrie


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When it is over..hit the road..lola nd God bless..Kathie Hate roaches,,

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good job, good story... I'm a sucker for repetition :) Love this! 10/10

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poem told a very good story. Better to hit the door running and not to look back. I like the many strong statements in the poem. Poem is outstanding. Direct and to the point.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 4, 2010
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Audrie
Audrie

tucson, AZ



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